I've decided nostalgia is my topic. Simply because 'remembrance' was too hard to fulfill. A YouTube video that matches my topic is The Tree of Life-You Spoke To Me. click on the link to watch.
The second artifact I decided to use was a song by Iron & wine:
"Give this stone to my brother
Cuz we found it playing in the barnyard
Many years agoHe'll remember hunting in the hills
When I was 10 years old
I lost it in myself and buried it too long
Now that I come to fall
Please say it's not too late
Now that I'm dead and gone
It pulled the baby teeth she keeps inside the drawer
Give this ring to my lover
I was scared and stupid not to ask
For her hand long before
I lost it in myself and buried it too long
Now that I come to fall
Please say it's not too late
Now that I'm dead and gone"
Each different verse makes separate people look back on their lives. This dying man makes sure that these people will remember old memories and he dies. Though death is near "please don't say it's too late now that I'm dead and gone." It gives a peaceful feeling to death saying that you don't have to say goodbye, you can live again in someones thoughts.
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ReplyDeleteSupport-2, You did well with the limited space, it would be good to expand the support on your claim.
Discussion-2, You interpret your subjects well, however, you could have deeper inferences.
Language-3, Good structure, and concise, accurate wording.
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ReplyDeleteLovely blog :)
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